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Reviewer: mugglenet27 (Signed)
12/23/2006 06:56 pm
That was definitely an interesting idea, but it could use a little polishing.  Break the paragraphs up some and watch the punctuation.  Otherwise, it was good.  I look forward to seeing more from you.  :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I haven't actually edited these fics as of yet, boarding school somewhat limits your available time!! but i will bear everything you've said in mind and edit them asap!! Megan Hogan xx

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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/18/2006 11:54 pm

Interesting writing; try breaking up the paragraphs to suit the mood of the piece, it would have done well to appear a bit more broken and a tad more desperate.

But it's done really well. :) Keep experimenting!

Author's Response:

Thanks, it was writin very quivkly and is yet to be beta'd so it's not at its best at the moment. If you enjoyed, why not try some of my other pieces?

Megan Hogan xx

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