OH! I love it! Very nicely done, with many twists I wasn't expecting. I LOVE your unbreakable vow scene, so touching. DM's a bit out of character, but he would be. Harry Potter's soul... man. This is really really good. Please update soon! If you don't... *fingers wand lovingly* Just kidding!
Wow, that was really neat. A lot happened in this chapter, things are getting interesting between Draco and Hermione, and though I don't usually follow that pairing you made it work. As well, it was really sad that Narcissa died. Good work.
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