What I liked about this chapter was the descriptions. You do them so wonderfully... you create the atmosphere very well. I also like the characterizations of the two main leads. You have kept them in character and done a good job of portraying grown up versions of them.

I also liked the plot. Its a very unique premise.

The only problem I had was with the tenses and i'll tell you about that in private so remember to ask me. 

"things changes" <---should be 'change,' somewhere in the Hermione-Padma conversation.

 I've told you already how wonderful this story is, but I thought I'd say it again after rereading the ending. Marvelous portrayal of these characters and their situation... it did indeed make me cry.

Thanks for writing it! And I think posting in ten points was a good decision.