I think this was one of the most well written one shots I have read in a long time. You took a relatively unused character and a mostly never seen angle and turned it into a beautiful ficlet using some very well thought out ideas and imagery.

Bravo!

I think this was one of the most well written one shots I have read in a long time. You took a relatively unused character and a mostly never seen angle and turned it into a beautiful ficlet using some very well thought out ideas and imagery.

Bravo!

This is so touching.  The dialogue is very real and tells you the characters' inner feelings. 

The comparison of Squibbitude with having to stay a caterpillar all your life is a wonderful, telling metaphor, though grubs do turn into something else, since they're larvae--maybe beetles (yuck)--or possibly moths (better). 

A good little story, written so simply that it feels real. Poor Arabella... I think this is the first story I've seen examining this sort of situation, it's really sad and is making me think. Now I want to go write, take the idea of squibs and run with it... hmm, I just might.

Very nice oneshot, I really enjoyed reading it.

Wow. That was very REAL, and most impressive.  If you can do something as impressive as this with a minor character like Mrs. Figg, I'd love to see what you can do with the main ones.

Keep writing, and thanks for sharing