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Reviewer: AriesGirl (Signed)
01/30/2008 10:21 am
Just read this from the beginning. Like that Draco was the first to show up at her door after her little song. Also the little mystery about Snape and Sara's mother. Albus seems happy that Harry and Sara havent consimated anything yet, and Harry seems happy about that fact too subconsiously. Also seems that Sara is beginning to realize she has more in common with Draco than Harry. Harry also seems to be coming to the same conclution. Like that you at last brought Ginny into the picture , if not just for a cameo part. I kept wondering through the first chapter what she thought of the whole Sara Harry thing. Now that I know, it fits. The girl is ticked off. Might like to see Sara try too hard to make nice nice with Ginny. Sara just might have a revolation about their relationships. who knows? Another thing I might have noticed that just might not be part of the story is that Sara has found a place for Harry to live, and a way to support himself, besides living with her and living off her wealth. (another subconsious act?) . Enjoying your plot and look foward to your next installment.


Chapter 12: Finnigan's Swill
Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
11/10/2006 06:19 pm
Fabulous. The story line keeps getting better...



Chapter 2: Ka-tet
Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Anonymous)
10/28/2006 01:35 pm
Well, I will most definately be keeping tabs on this one. Well done!



Harry Falls in Love
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/28/2006 01:22 pm

Interesting story, but your main character is quite the Mary Sue. Be careful to keep your characters realistic so that your story stays believable!

Keep writing.




Harry Falls in Love
Reviewer: Cyborg (Signed)
10/28/2006 01:11 pm
Well I've read much more, and have even drifted over to your site to read the rest. I'm addicted! One of the things that truly disturbed me was Sara's drinking problem. Very depressing. I dont want to say too much in case I spoil it for someone else, but great job!


Harry Falls in Love
Reviewer: Cyborg (Signed)
10/13/2006 12:10 am
What a strange story! I mean that in the best way, of course. The way that the beginning was written, about Sara crying the rain into existance, was very stylized and created a great atmosphere. I click on it to find it completed, even though I've never even heard of it before. Great stuff, love Sara, and i will definately read this in the future. Even the author's name adds to the story.

Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, the story was completed in 2003. There are 36 chapters. I'm just about to wrap up ch 14 of the sequel. To be honest, the first several chapters absolutely suck. I'm revising them and am currently working on ch 6, but I still hate them. The story, and the writing, definately improve, so keep reading! Thanks for my first review!



Harry Falls in Love
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