Very intense... I was happy that there was a moment when Dudley seemed to recognizewhat Harry had tried to do. That bodes well. And the fact that Sara, who seems like such a sweet person, could see something good in him is also a good sign. I am terribly worried about Harry though. If the validating sort of people see this review, please do your thing and get the next chapter up so we can see what happens to everybody! I am quite taken... Notadryeye, thanks for writing this. I like to believe Dudley may be redeemable, and hey, who doesn't like to see Harry in life threatening situations? *wink wink*
Author's Response: If you don't want to wait for the next chapter...you can go to Siye.co.uk/siye and it's posted up to chapter 20 there. I just decided to post it here
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