That was really good, I wish there was more to the fic though. I would love to learn what happens when Margaret joins the DA. It's cool to have that whole related-to-Lucius thing thrown in there, lol. But really, Great job!
Author's Response: It's in Year 6. However, McKee has her own story line entirely, which unfortunately isn't really on this site yet.
Fascinating story line - you should write at least several follow up chapters - it will be AU after HBP, but you should do it anyway.
I like Margret's attitude - she has what it would take to do what she says she wants to do.
Go for it.
If you would like help, or a story line to plug into, contact me.
Author's Response: Thank you for the offer, but I actually have 15 chapters written on our lovely McKee. It's just not on this site yet. ;)