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Reviewer: Gmariam (Signed)
03/24/2009 08:00 pm

This is a great subject for a poem, especially this form of poem. I like how it tells a story. With DH complete you could totally expand it.  I missed a few beats here and there but thought you did a nice job, especially with the end.  I wish someone had reviewed it much earlier than this! ~Gina :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I am glad that you liked the poem. I wrote it for a contest on another site and was limited in the number of words that I could write. I would like to expand on it one of these days when I can get the time. Any ideas or suggestions are appreciated. Thank you again...~Dawn~




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