Hello. I enjoyed your first chapter. However, I thought it was a little on the short side. You do seem to write well though. Your second chapter, which seems to be waiting for validation, appears to be quite a bit longer so hopefully it is a sign of things to come.
While I have never read any HG/RL before, this seems to be as good a place as any to start and I am looking forward to seeing what direction you take the story.
Thanks for sharing with us, and keep writing....
Author's Response: This was the shortest chapter of the seven I have written, the shortest after that is around 2600, the longest over 5000. I'm delighted to be your first HG/RL, and whilst I know its not everyones cup of tea, I'm hoping to at least take people on a convincing journey. I hope you keep reading and enjoy it :)