Reviews For Old Moon

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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/28/2006 03:53 pm
Interesting story so far, can't wait to see where it goes. Keep writing!


In Old Wounds
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/28/2006 03:44 pm
A good first chapter, can't wait to read the second. Keep it up!


Stirrings of Trouble
Reviewer: EnigmaDecoder (Signed)
10/20/2006 02:43 pm

Hello.  I enjoyed your first chapter.  However, I thought it was a little on the short side. You do seem to write well though.  Your second chapter, which seems to be waiting for validation, appears to be quite a bit longer so hopefully it is a sign of things to come.

While I have never read any HG/RL before, this seems to be as good a place as any to start and I am looking forward to seeing what direction you take the story.

Thanks for sharing with us, and keep writing.... 



Author's Response: This was the shortest chapter of the seven I have written, the shortest after that is around 2600, the longest over 5000. I'm delighted to be your first HG/RL, and whilst I know its not everyones cup of tea, I'm hoping to at least take people on a convincing journey. I hope you keep reading and enjoy it :)



Stirrings of Trouble
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