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Reviewer: Simple_Plan (Anonymous)
09/24/2006 06:44 pm
Oooh, that was great! I really liked how you used Lupin as your main character; it's a nice change from what I usually read. I also like how you had him 'learn' to be a werewolf, but what I got a TEENY bit confused on was the lack of use in his name when you were referring to his past. Great job x 100,000,000,000,000,000! =D


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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
09/24/2006 04:58 pm

Very nice! I love Remus-based stories, and you did him perfectly in this, especially how the flashbacks were written like a child was telling it. I did love this line:

"That's what they all say in the beginning." With a smirk, Fenrir walks away toward the cottage, leaving him with a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach.

I loved it! *grins* And nice name meanings. :D




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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
09/24/2006 01:57 pm
This is very good work! I love the way you've portrayed Lupin and the flashbacks work brilliantly. Great work, kiddo


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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
09/24/2006 01:21 pm

Nice job with this. My favorite part was "Daddy," Remus says, grinning proudly, blood staining his teeth, "I did good."   




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