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Reviewer: Nadia_Gold (Signed)
05/01/2007 07:12 pm
Wow... just wow


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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
10/01/2006 10:49 am

Oh, that's horribly depressing. Just... ouch.

Marvelously written, the emotions were intense. One comment, though: "releasing the breath he had realized he was holding." That's kind of awkward, 'he had realized.' Maybe hadn't, or maybe he had just realized.

Fantastic story, keep it up!




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Reviewer: dancefreak92 (Signed)
09/24/2006 12:39 pm
This was a good story. Made me want to cry.I wonder who the mother is of the child? Well anyway good job!


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