fVery nice job. "Piano Man" is one of my favorite songs; I really liked how you adapted it to suit Harry Potter. I was going through the song into my head to see what came next, actually. Your waitress had me laughing.
On a side note, if you don't want to double space your song lyrics and stuff like that, shift+enter will give you a single space. Heh, the day I figured that out was one of the red-letter days of my life.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks. I didn't realize I had a review on here, or I would have responded sooner. ^.^ I'm glad you liked it. I shall post the sequel.