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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
09/11/2006 02:18 pm
Hehe! Nice one! I loved the way you wrote Harry's anger. A very good job


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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
09/10/2006 09:17 pm
Very nice ending, once again. I love how you tied the prompt into this, especially, as I never would have thought of something like that. I loved it! :D


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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/10/2006 08:36 pm
Interesting little snapshot, but it felt a bit stiff. Try and keep the thoughts flowing naturally, and the emotions will bleed through a bit more. Nice adaptation of the prompt, though.


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