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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
09/11/2006 02:20 pm
I think this is the best drabble you have written so far! Excellent work, kiddo!
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
09/10/2006 09:14 pm
Very nice! I especially liked the last line, and really, it's a whole new idea on how Alice might actually be. Most people don't think further into it. Great job!
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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/10/2006 08:34 pm
Some punctuation and small errors (" pain... Somehow" shouldn't be capitalized, should it?), but the emotion in the piece almost completely overrode it.
Just be careful, because you can't get away with as much in a drabble. :) Good writing, though, and the last line brought it all together very cleanly.
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