Nice job on this. I know close to nothing about poetry, haha, so yeah. But still, I like the ending, and I wonder who'll get the whole 'dead' concept. Haha. Anyway, hope you put more of your stuff up soon. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, VSNDPWSTTM. ;)
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Well, I'm glad to see you writing :). Good job and it'll only get better as you keep on writing :)
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks JD :)
If I Told You