Reviews For Complicated Lives

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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/10/2006 08:32 pm
Good characterizations and establishment of setting; this worked well as a beginning of a story. Just be sure to keep it interesting as it goes on! :)


Chapter 1: Quidditch, Orphans, and Harrys
Reviewer: Jose Arbelada (Anonymous)
09/09/2006 07:02 pm
Good first chapter. Left me wanting more.


Chapter 1: Quidditch, Orphans, and Harrys
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