Very interesting.
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Reviews For Wings from the Waters
Reviewer: Tanydwr (Anonymous)
04/26/2007 07:37 am
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/12/2006 05:10 pm
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/10/2006 08:25 pm
Even if she had known what cardio-pulmonary resuscitation was, Minerva couldn't have answered. For only now had the meaning, and the connotations, of the name Harry sunk into her brain.
^^Those two sentences are art. Love it. Your characterization of Hagrid seems a bit off, and your development is occasionally awkward, but this is an interesting story so far and I can't wait to see where you end up taking it.
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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/10/2006 08:16 pm
Interesting premise, and good first chapter. Nice writing.
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