Ive enjoyed the story so far, but this last chapter was quite a bit... off. Rachel's character didnt meld into the story line at all, her spoken lines seemingly inserted at random. There were times I was wondering if this chapter was even written by the same author. I look forward to the rest of the story and I really hope that the coming chapters are back up to your usual standard.
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