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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
09/13/2006 01:24 pm

Okay, I think I goofed up over there. The start was pretty identical, but hte second chapter is completely different. It needs a bit more flow, if I am to be honest with you. You could add some lines here and there just to keep it going.
Having said that, the plot is very interesting and I can't wait to read more




Chapter 1 : Trouble at Night
Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
09/13/2006 01:19 pm
I get this distinct feeling that I have read this fic on ff.net ages ago! I'll read ahead and find out! I love the start.. If it's Regulus Black who visited LM in Azkaban, it's the same fic with the name HP nad Voldemort's Horcruxes



Prologue : The Stranger
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