Reviews For Why Me?

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Reviewer: DarkMoonSlave (Signed)
03/30/2007 07:44 pm
Beautiful.. keep going!

Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch DarkMoonSlave!:)

Jess:)




Chapter 3
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
02/23/2007 07:32 pm

OMG plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz write mor SOON .it's FAB can't wait for da rest .Keep it up !!



Author's Response:

OMG thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! lol!

Thanks for the great review sweetie! I'm glad you liked it! 




Chapter 3
Reviewer: Cyborg (Signed)
10/29/2006 03:47 pm
Liked it, but some of the dialogue during the argument was confusing. Make sure its clear to the reader who is saying what. I think you are having draco say here what Rowling is having him think in canon. Very nice!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much once more Cyborg for the great review! Yay! I'm so happy that you think Draco's okay! I wouldn't want to change the character from what JK intended so I'm very glad to hear you say that! :)

I 'll take your advice on the dialogue thing! Thanks for the heads up! :)

<>Thanks a bunch! I always love you reviews! :)

HermioneTwin :) 

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Chapter 3
Reviewer: lily 101 (Anonymous)
09/26/2006 08:31 pm
Wow loved it and can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the oh-so-sweet review my dear! I'm happy you like it!

I promise to update soon!

Jess:) 




Chapter 2
Reviewer: Cyborg (Signed)
09/26/2006 06:37 pm

Oh me oh my. What a powerful incentive for Draco to turn away from the dark lord. Children have always been a stong symbol of innocence, and combining that with the rose (a white one nonetheless) it reflects Draco's hestiency to do away with something so pure. 

I may be looking too far into it, but I loved how she gave him the white rose, perhaps its telling us that Draco has a bit of innocence left in himself? Or am I looking too far into it? 

 I would try to shy away from putting authors notes, or anything similar, into the body of the story. FLASHBACK and END OF FLASHBACK notes remind the reader that they arent part of the story, and you lose some of your power as an author over them.

 

Great job! I predict his may be a Draco/Hermione fic? 

 



Author's Response:

<>Wow! Thank you sooo incredibly much for that amazing review!!!!! I find it so great that you read into it that much! Don't worry, you're far from reading into it TOO much though! Of course not, I find it awesome! =)

<> You're point of view on the innocence of children and the white rose and how it affects Draco if exactly how I hoped people would see it. The rose symbolizes something pure and delicate, given by an innocent child who has no idea of the actual evilness  standing before her. It saved Draco from murder, and it may indeed save him again...oops, did I say too much?

<>Draco does indeed have some innocence left in him. He hasn't murdered or performed an unforgivable, and as I mentioned, he does have a conscience. His father may have slightly brainwashed him into his prejudices, but he hasn't broken him yet!

<>I'll definately take your advice on the author notes and such. You're completely right, it does take a reader out of the story. I'm happy you brought that up, as I had failed to see it before you mentioned it. Thanks a ton for that one!

<>I thank you infinatively for the AMAZING review! Actually, I should say reviewS! You made my day sweetie! :)

<>As for you prediction, well, we'll just see about that...wink wink!

Thanks a bunch my dear! 

<>Jess :) 

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Chapter 2
Reviewer: Cyborg (Signed)
09/26/2006 06:30 pm
How depressing :) The diary approach is an interesting way of going about the story through Hermione's eyes. Are you planning on sticking with it, or are you going to got towards more of a third person narrative?

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review Cyborg! I'm sorry if I got you depressed! :) I suggest ice-cream for that! Preferably the eeextra oh-so-rich and creamy kind! =D

I'm glad you liked the diary idea! I don't really know if I'm going to stick with it or not. Maybe drop in a few entries here and there to make Hermione's thoughts clearer, or maybe I'll just write out her point of view in italic whenever I wan't to describe her emotions...Hmm...we'll see!

Thank you so much for reviewing, I can't tell you how happy that makes me!!!! :)

Cheers,

Jess :) 




Chapter 1
Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
09/14/2006 01:20 pm
It's pretty funny and very good for a first attempt fic. *waits for the next update*

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! I should be updating pretty soon now! :)



Chapter 1
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