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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
09/16/2006 08:17 pm
Good job with this chapter. The first ppart about Snape, though, the "I hate having Gryffindor children running around our headquarters," said a cold voice. It was surely Snape talking. "And they are the ones I dislike most." It doesn't seem like he's the typw to say that to others, and be open about it. Again, good chappy. :) 


Worries
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
09/11/2006 06:15 pm
That was a weird dream. Good start. It seems a little rushed, though. Try to take it slower. Other than that, good job. :)



Impossible Nightmare (Prologue)
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