It was a good chapter. I just had one thing- I don't Hermione would be one to say 'hell, even if Malfoy was staring at a dragon. Other than that, good job. Can't wait to find out more about the note and the dragon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I get what you mean...I wrote "hell" because she was really frustrated with him...=P
Chaos on Cue
Good start. Nice descriptions, and I loved the ending. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! More is coming soon!!
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