Reviews For A New Revelation

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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
09/09/2006 07:08 pm
It was a good chapter. I just had one thing- I don't Hermione would be one to say 'hell, even if Malfoy was staring at a dragon. Other than that, good job. Can't wait to find out more about the note and the dragon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I get what you mean...I wrote "hell" because she was really frustrated with him...=P



Chaos on Cue
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
08/24/2006 06:57 pm
Good start. Nice descriptions, and I loved the ending. Can't wait for more! :) 

Author's Response: Thanks so much! More is coming soon!!



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