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Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous)
11/18/2006 04:03 pm

Simone this was the first story I have read of yours and I loved it.  Just the way you know how to use words is amazing.  Now i have to go read the rest of your stories.




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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
08/25/2006 04:30 pm
You pack a lot of emotion and action in a few words! I just love the comparison of Pansy and a doll. Her disjointed thoughts add to the depth and emotion. I like the addition of Luna at the end.


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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
08/24/2006 12:04 am
Oooh, wow. I adored this one. Really. You do Luna so perfectly... so dreamy, mysterious. And I do love your writing style. Your portrayal of both Draco and Pansy is just... so perfect. Amazing job! Really.


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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
08/21/2006 12:59 pm
Really great job, I loved it.


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Reviewer: lily 101 (Anonymous)
08/16/2006 06:42 pm
Truly amazing story it really captured the feelings of someone in that position. :)


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