A Luna Lovegood, with amnesia. That is a brain-pretzel right there, but this is ingenious. I love the use of flowers -- white roses (innocence), pansies. The use of color --very symbolic. The mirror. Heh, and the best thing is that even though Luna doesn't know who she is... it's still her, in many ways. Her observations about Hermione, while odd, were spot on and perfect Luna logic. The scene with Luna's father was just heart-breaking, especially when Luna finds out later.
You know, the minute I finished this I couldn't stop chanting 'wow' in my head. Just, really... woah. One of the most emotional pieces I've ever read, I think. Well, how I look at it, anyway. I love the song Wonderwall, and it fit this piece very nicely. The ending was just... amazing, but oh so sad. You're a magnificent writer. I loved it!
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