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Reviewer: EnigmaDecoder (Signed)
10/28/2006 04:16 pm
Wonderful!  I normally don't go in for post HBP fics, but this was marvelous, and I could easily see it as an epilogue to JKR's 7th book.  well done.


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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
09/30/2006 11:21 am

I wish he hadn't smirked at the end there, it ruined an otherwise perfect ending.

This is a really nice story, very deep and heartfelt. I just wish the dialogue was a bit more relaxed... I mean, I know people change in war, but I don't think hi's speaking style would become quite so rigid.

I did, though, really love these two lines: “I cast the Killing Curse at the cup,” he said suddenly, looking at the tomb bravely, with a hint of defiance, of rebellion in his eyes. After getting no reaction except for the hoot of an owl in the nearby forest, his shoulders sagged and he exhaled loudly.

 Those lines just completely captured Harry and everything about his character, so brilliant job on that.

Keep writing!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I'm glad you like the fic. Those are my fave lines as well.

Unfortunately, I'm not a fan of dialogue. Something I'm trying to cure, but usually, the characters don't cooperate, and I prefer narration. 

Chris



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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
08/20/2006 10:04 pm
I loved this, truly. Especially how you had Harry telling Dumbledore (well, his tomb, really) all of what happened... You had him telling a bit more than the basics, but we got to read the details from his thoughts. A very nice portrayal of Harry, and I loved the ending.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the fic :) Thanks for reviewing :)

Chris



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