You have every reason to be proud.
Absolutely stunning piece of fiction.
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Reviewer: Kats (Anonymous)
11/23/2006 10:53 am
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
09/03/2006 10:20 pm
You;ve managed to assemble a heartbreaking tale, with equal amounts of love and hurt. You feel sorry for Draco and Pansy, and Luna. They are all trapped. And the cycle begins again with poor Arrakis. Imagine being told by mum that she didn't choose your dad! Ouch!
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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
08/15/2006 06:57 am
This is fantastic work, Simone. Only bit of criticism I would give is the timelines in some scenes suddenly appear and it takes you a moment to reflect where this scene appeared from. Eventually, you get the crux of the story and learn to love it
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Hey JD,
Thanks so much for taking your time to read this and review it. I'm very happy that you liked it.
About the scenes where you say the timelines are a little unclear... I think it must be the memory-scenes. Most of them start with Once upon a... something, right? If those are the scenes of which you speak, the reason I have not made it more clear when they take place is because it's not very important. It is only important that it is something Pansy remembers from back when Luna and she were together.
However, I am sorry if it interrupted your reading a bit. Thanks again for the comment.
~ S.
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