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Reviewer: silver_tears (Anonymous)
09/14/2006 03:16 pm
I have finally tracked down chapter 4 of this story. :) It’s brilliant. I mean it. It’s so fantastic the way you actually got them not to hate each other in only 4 chaps. Well, the best thing about it is that’s it doesn’t cliché or OOC. So, yeah, you did a great job there. The plot is totally cool. I’m really curious to see where this is going.  Something I forgot to say about a previous chapter – [I think it was chapter 2?] I laughed out loud for a very long time at this bit: Finally, that b-” “Ron!” -witch will get what she deserves…” =D Also…I found a typo:[From this chapter]At a loss, he walked through the city, feeling ore and more hungry, and regretful that he'd refused the hospital food when the nurse had offered him breakfast. Overall it’s lovely. Keep it up. ;) -Debbie


Chapter Four
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
08/21/2006 12:54 pm
I loved how you brought the two together. Harry's thoughts on how they were treating him were displayed quite well, and the ending to this chapter makes me want moore. I wonder how you'll show Harry and Bella getting along. Very intriguing. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D I'm still working on the "getting along" bit. They haven't been cooperative, not really.

Chris



Chapter 2
Reviewer: Sly Severus (Anonymous)
08/16/2006 01:00 am
I found it! :)  I absolutly love it.  I can't wait for more.  I'm really glad I asked you about this.

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you managed to find it :) Thanks for the review.

Chris



Chapter 1
Reviewer: mugglenet27 (Signed)
08/14/2006 07:29 pm
Ooh.  Interesting (and evil) place to end...I've never read anything that's Bella/Harry, but I look forward to this.  Everything is quite realistic and well written.  I can't want to find out what happens.  Good work.  :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I hope you'll like what happens next :) Chris



Chapter 1
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
08/14/2006 11:01 am
I really do like the start of this story, hehe. Very nice. I'm one for dark things a lot, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Soon, little grasshopper, soon :)

Thanks for the review :)

Chris



Chapter 1
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