Oh you sadist. You write H/G and then you want the poor sod to die. terrible :P... but it's really nice :-)
To nitpick or not to nitpick... that's the question... It's brilliantly written :-). Unfortunately, there's no such thing as choppy song lyrics :P
Hmm. I suck at guessing, so I won't even try to figure out who it is... but very, very nice. Nice topic, too. (Hey, it's midnight, I can't think of better words. x.x) *laughs* I can't wait to hear you sing it! *grins* Oh, how I adore your songs... :D