I wanted to be the first to leave you a review, since I'm so intimately acquainted with this chapter.
I loved it. I thought you did a brilliant job tying everything down and keeping it all in order. I'm as proud of this as I hope you are.
Only one thing I'd change...the length of the chapters. It's almost exhausting to read all this at one time! But it's still a great story.
Beautiful job. Please keep writing!
Author's Response:
hi! ^_^
thanks for being the first and only one to review! :D
i appreciate all of the work you did for me!
i know it's long ... it's not the longest chapter, mind you! :p lol
i'll keep writing! :D
thanks again for reviewing and beta-ing for me!