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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
08/06/2006 03:05 pm
Interesting. Don't be afraid to take time and develop your settings and plot... this could have easily been four chapters, had you offered a bit more backstory and expanded to establish characters and the like. Still, a good start!


Chapter 1- Do I get to call you Daddy now?
Reviewer: peekaboo (Anonymous)
07/28/2006 11:49 pm
why didn't u explain all the stuff about voldie and magic?

Author's Response: it would have taken too long. plus, i started this on a spur of the moment 2 am in the morning, and i was too lazy to do all that. just imagine that everything that happened in cannon happened in the story, except that when sirius went after wormtail he stunned him and everything got sorted out correctly. wormtail is in azkaban in this fic.



Chapter 1- Do I get to call you Daddy now?
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