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Reviewer: scopart (Signed)
11/26/2006 05:14 pm

Words cannot describe...

I don't know that I've ever read a fic where these three were so well characterized.  Especially all three in one!  This was amazing!  I love the way you moved through the years.  And the breaks in the paragraphs were beautifully done. 

This had me hanging on every word.  Well done.




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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
07/28/2006 04:52 pm

A good piece that came together well. I didn't like that the first part was past tense - 'hated' - while the rest was 'hates.' While I can understand why you did it, you're writing all from that specific moment in time and so they should all be present.

Beyond that, it was good. A tad repetitive, but good overall and it was refreshing to see someone trying a different writing style.




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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
07/28/2006 10:47 am
Ooooh. Very, very nice. I could really get into all three girls' stories, even if I already knew them, I love how you wrote them. It was like it was information I didn't already know, and yet, I knew it from reading the books. I love the last few lines of Ginny's story, too. Very... chilling, to me at least. I loved it!


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