Words cannot describe...

I don't know that I've ever read a fic where these three were so well characterized.  Especially all three in one!  This was amazing!  I love the way you moved through the years.  And the breaks in the paragraphs were beautifully done. 

This had me hanging on every word.  Well done.

A good piece that came together well. I didn't like that the first part was past tense - 'hated' - while the rest was 'hates.' While I can understand why you did it, you're writing all from that specific moment in time and so they should all be present.

Beyond that, it was good. A tad repetitive, but good overall and it was refreshing to see someone trying a different writing style.