Author's Response: I always try my hardest to prevent any grammatical errors, but I'm far from perfect, I know. Thank you very much for reading!
Git
Reviews For It's A Shame
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
07/29/2006 06:47 pm
Good start. Nice descriptions. I think there were one or two grammar problems, but don't worry about them. Again, good start, can't wait for an update :)
Author's Response: I always try my hardest to prevent any grammatical errors, but I'm far from perfect, I know. Thank you very much for reading!
Author's Response: I always try my hardest to prevent any grammatical errors, but I'm far from perfect, I know. Thank you very much for reading!
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
07/27/2006 08:59 am
An interesting start... not the kind of plot that interests me, but I had to leave you a review because one part was SO PERFECT and I loved it:
Hermione arched her left eyebrow. "What is, Malfoy?" she asked cautiously.
"That you’re so smart. Almost makes you respectable."
Love it. Awesome, awesome dialogue.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the dialogue, even though it's not the type of plot that generally interests you. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Git