Excellent!  Once again, I think you could always add more to the chapters.  I really like this story.  Great Job and I can't wait to read Harry's reactions.

Thank god I jumped into this with another chapter up, that cliffie was ugly.  Great job, I like that you have a nice methodic rhythm, would like a little more in your chaps tho.  but I guess thats always the request.  Beautifully done, on to chapter 3

sounds like a great start to what should turn out to be a killer story!

 ~starry

I've read this before, obviously, and I'm a fan. :) So rereading it will be a delight.

This chapter could use some polish, but beyond that it's great. :) Glad to see you posting!