Excellent! Once again, I think you could always add more to the chapters. I really like this story. Great Job and I can't wait to read Harry's reactions.
Thank god I jumped into this with another chapter up, that cliffie was ugly. Great job, I like that you have a nice methodic rhythm, would like a little more in your chaps tho. but I guess thats always the request. Beautifully done, on to chapter 3
sounds like a great start to what should turn out to be a killer story!
I've read this before, obviously, and I'm a fan. :) So rereading it will be a delight.
This chapter could use some polish, but beyond that it's great. :) Glad to see you posting!