Arrrgh. *laughs* I would've never thought Ginny would be the one to break up with him, but surprisingly, in this story, it works. And I do remember you warned me not to get attached to the characters, don't worry. *snickers* Poor Ginny. I'm glad she'll be okay, but ergh, she was pretty bad. It's good that Ron didn't explode as much as Harry was expecting, too. Hehe. I wonder what Voldy will do next, and how Ron and Hermione will react after finding out that Harry kept yet another thing from them. I mean, talking to Voldy is a pretty big thing. *laughs* I do love how you do Voldemort, too. Creepy, but in a good way. I love it, can't wait for more to find out what happens! :D
i'll be honest this is where i almost walked away from your story to begin with.... what brought me back was how well it was written. the images of death and dispair really did turn me off, i thought "yeah just another harry bites the big one story" and to be perfectly honest none of those stories interest me. too many authors are hell bent on seeing harry die or fail. true while i'm not a big fan of the "super harry" stories either, i feel both types of authors miss the point. harry is still an ordinary guy, yes he has power and yes he is tasked to accomplish herculean tasks which would utterly crush most with the wieght of those responsibilties much less finishing them. however harry struggles on no matter what, and that is what makes him a hero. some have said they didn't like the fact harry didn't mourn the passing of sirus much at the beginning of book six after all the emotion over cedric's death in five. i think Ms. Rowling was showing us just how much harry had grown and matured. even mrs. weasley's comment on how much harry and ron had grown, " it looks as if both of you had streching hexs palaced upon you" as i probably misquote i believe here is where harry leaves being a boy and becomes a man. great story, a perfect ten