seems a shame to leave only one review after reading this from the start over the last few days but ...
I've really got into this but began to get bogged down at the end with the disintegration of Harry'd relationship with Ginny. It seems that she recognises that its only him that can defeat Voldemort but is willing to do what Voldemort wants her to do by leaving Harry.
*laughs at the end* Well, I'm glad Ginny is being a tad more friendly, even if it may be because Hermione talked to her. Though I think it's because of something else. Ah well. A line I liked:
"Right. I think I noticed that. It's her hair isn't it? It's a bit shorter I think."
*snickers* Nice. I was wondering when either Ron or Hermione would be attacked, and who would be next. I wonder when Ron will wake up, too. I liked how you did Hermione's reaction to Ginny behaving like she did in the Great Hall. It's always fun to see how you characterize people. Hehe. I wonder what'll happen next with Ginny, and how she'll act from now on... continue being argumentative, or continue being friendly, and why. *snickers* And I'm curious to see if the DA does exist still. I mean, Ginny had a point there... I hope Harry will snap out of it soon. Okay, enough rambling from me. I loved it! *wants moooore*
Ooh, that was interesting to read. I love how Ron got Harry out of bed. *snickers* That was amusing. A line I had laughed at:
"I'm still alive," he announced flatly. "No guarantees about tomorrow. I'm sure Hermione will keep you up to date."
Harry seems without any hope whatsoever, and I hope that DA meeting taught him something. You write action and dueling scenes so well. I liked how you did the scene in the Great Hall in the morning, too. Ginny's reaction was pretty realistic. And ooh, only a few chapters away from chapter 46, too. I had to snicker at Pomfrey, automatically asking where Harry was. I think the main question in my mind right now is if Harry can do it without Ginny. I think he might be able to if he turns himself around. Anyway, I loved this chapter! *wants more*