"As I said, that map is a wonderful creation, but one cannot look at the map, and the world at the same time, and there are many ways of being someplace without being anywhere."
Now that will make your head hurt if you try to figure it out. There was another one I loved, too, but I forgot what it was. I'll bug you with it later if I remember. I love how you did this one, though. Nicely done DA meeting. So I guess it'll be similar, yet not. (O.o Yeah, I won't be making sense for a while. *laughs*) I like how you did the message that Ginny sent them, and having Harry figure it out first. Hehe, I’m still wondering when the others will figure it out. And I liked how you had Albus appear, though that line really did make my head hurt. (Now I know why you said it should be taken in small amounts… one chapter makes my head spin, hehe, but it’s fun. * snickers*)
I had to laugh when you had two Hufflepuffs run away, though. I do like how you put the small things like that in your chapters. I liked how Dumbledore set up the parchment, too. Ooh, bringing Daphne and Blaise into this, too. How big of parts will they have, I wonder. I like how you showed Harry’s power in this one, too. Ow, my head… Right, supposed to be reviewing. Hehe.
I love how you did the meeting with Claire, and her reaction to finding out he was in the room. (And Claire is a good name for her… It just, fits.) So similar to Harry. I wonder if he’ll try to be friends with her, though it could prove to be difficult since he would have to make sure he didn’t slip with the godfather part. Ah well, only the future chapters will tell.
You really do write visions/dreams nicely, though. I’m sure that ‘meeting’ will bring many thoughts and doubts for Harry. Okay, I think this review is long enough. Hehe. Boredom + long/eventful chapter= long review. I loved it, though, and can’t wait to see where you take this story!