Your story is awesome. I can't wait till you get another chapter in. Bravo!
The flashbacks were heartwrenching. I wanted to cry.
I mean, the rest of this was marvelously crafted and full of emotion - god, I can just follow every thought that Harry has, and all of his decisions - but the flashbacks in particular were brilliant.
An amazing chapter, to be certain. Can't wait for more. :)
Yes! An update! And with another great chapter! I swear, this story just keeps getting better and better (if that's even possible).
I love how you did the tenses: past tense for flashbacks and present for the, well, present. I hadn't really noticed that before. I love how you introduced Zabini, along with how Harry's getting himself mixed up with Livi, Ron, and Hermione.
The plot twists just keep coming and the reader just keeps wanting to read more! I wonder what the story will be; you left off at a nice spot there. And I adore how you do Harry's thoughts, and his debates with himself over leaving and staying. Anyway, I can't wait for more! Amazing story! :D
Oh, wow, this just keeps getting better with more and more twists. I want more! Especially with the ending to this chapter. I wonder how Hermione got in a wheelchair, and what they're done there. And I feel so sorry for Harry. He's lived his life with these people... and he's the only one who will remember it. They don't, and he's nothing to them. It's a great twist, though, and I have a feeling that because of that Harry'll talk with portrait!Malfoy some more.
And I had to laugh at the conversation between him and (real) Malfoy too, as they were both just so in character. Can't wait for more! Seriously. *laughs* I love it so far, and want to see where you take this!
Yay Amazing!!!!!!!!! Wow... Now I can finally stop bugging you on chat for the update... Well... Or maybe not, now I must read chapter four!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No pressure... ;) Kay.
Oh and I'll miss that Slash chat thing you are hosting,
:( Maybe you'll host another one soon :)