A really sad but strong piece. Could have used a bit more detail work, but a good overall feel. I loved the comparison of December to August, it set the end mood perfectly.
Author's Response: I know this took forever to respond to but thank you!!!! Im currently re-writing it all, and hopefully you will continue to read.
Wow Shelby, again, you are an awesome writer, don't let anything stop you. I look foward to reading more. You're adjustments made it even better, didn't know it could get better but it did, well luv ya baby!