I loved this oneshot! It's very interesting (I think I've said that too many times now, haha) and I love the twist you have of Lily falling in love with him because of that. And since we actually don't know how she fell in love with him, it could be very plausible that something like this happened. But who knows? It's a creative idea, anyway. Very nice job!! :D
Author's Response: Why, thank you! This idea, as i've said, was completely random. I'm happy you enjoyed it and its randomness!