Awww...you made Neviile's pain and need very real for me. Bubblegum wrappers--who'da thunk it?
It's amzing that you could fit all of this into 700 words...
This is a beautiful and sensitively-written story from Neville's POV - a character so often overlooked in the HP fan fic genre. Very sad, filled with the warmth of love for family and the support of friends. Well done!
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