Reviews For To Love With Hate

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Reviewer: mary ellis (Anonymous)
07/02/2006 05:35 pm

Yes, I like!  The plot thickens, and Riddle is already showing his tyrannical personality.  Although you initially describe everyone by the color of their eyes and hair (and they're all a little too glam for my taste), you make their differing personalities come through in the dialogue, so it doesn't seem so much like an Anime adventure.

  As a Riddle-McGonagall addict, I should remind you that this is happening back in the 1940s, so some of the slang you use is not quite authentic, but who cares about that?  TR's last year at Hogwarts is certainly a good choice for a story.  I look forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your honest opinion,it is really appreciated. I also noticed that some of the language might not be "apropriate" for that decade but I guess it just makes writing more easy...The story it's not only about TR's last year at covers some years after that but you'll see... ;)

Thanks again for your support!!

Hogsmeade incidents
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
06/27/2006 05:19 pm
That was a great chapter, but I think you forgot the apostrophe in "won't", but that's ok. :) good jon with this, can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks!!The next chapter will be out soon but I won't be able to update for a while cause I'm leaving for vacations....Thanks for the warning I'll change that... ;)

Hogsmeade incidents
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
06/23/2006 01:23 pm
great start so far, I love it. :) great descriptions. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!!The next chapter will be posted soon!!

Head Boy
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