Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) the next chapter is with my beta, and will be up soon, I hope :)
Interesting first chapter... you jump around rather a lot, but it sort of works (though I think Harry would offer more thought to the Dudley situation there, really).
Good writing, though.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
I know I've been lagging on reviewing your stuff, especially this story. Sorry! Anyway, I loved this one. I especially liked how you described everything, with the ball and such. I like how you portray The Keeper, and the descriptions of when Harry was in Voldy's head was nice. Great job! :D
Oh... and I missed a correction. The Disclaimer, 'belong' should be 'belongs'. Haha. :)
Author's Response: Well, I'm off to correct it :) Thank you for all your reviews (but don't feel like you have to review my stuff. The awesome beta work you do is more than enough) I'm glad you liked the chapter :) Chris
Author's Response: hehe :) Thanks for the review :D Chris
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Chris