WHAT!? okay, u have to right a sequel! :)
so here are my thoughts -- so when harry was describing Cho, he was really talking about Ginny? but then if he still loves Ginny why did he wait till AFTER he married Cho to find out?? and he had a gloomy face when he returned! but then maybe ginny's gone crazy and SHE is really harry's wife and doesnt know whats' what anumore? lol i think that ones a bit far fetched, anyway it was a fantastic chappie! just gorgeous! :) 10/10!
Honestly? I didn't like it. It may be because it's Harry and Ginny and not a happy ending, or because I think fanfics should aim at being fun - instead of making us feel dreadful.
If that was your intention, though, congratulations. Very good.
yay! thank you so much! i probably will turn it into a full story though, but at the moment im super busy with school and life problems. hehe but when everything is great again, i'll probably write more.
I'm pretty sure Harry said that last line with regret and remorse, especially after the whole paragraph where he described "Cho." It really sounded to me like he was describing Ginny. I'd encourage you to make this story longer because it really is an interesting plot line and the writing is beautiful and deep. Great job!
Author's Response: ooo thank you! thats like....exactly what i was hoping people would say! thats exactly what i meant! eeee!!
thanks! im glad you liked it! ^.^
Author's Response: o thanks for reviewing! and people actually read authors notes! IM AMAAAAAZED! haha just kidding. thanks for the review!