Wow, great start! I love your stories, they're so well written and everything! Update soon, please!! I can't wait to find out what Tonks has to say about Harry.
Seems like I got my wish, huh? I got just about every answer I wanted! Things make SO much more sense now! It's like little pieces of a puzzle that finally slipped into place. Amazing!
This was wonderful, the only thing it didn't answer was what that monster that jumped out the arch was. It can't be Harry (unless it's an evil duplicate, lol) because he was fighting Grigore at the time. So, the only thing for it would be that whatever it was is in fact _pretending_ to be Harry in order to cause that whole mess. So, am I reaching? Or isn't it too wild?
Okay, that's about all the theorizing you'll get this time round, I'm sick and my head's about to explode and the only reason I'm not passed out in bed right now is because I got the evil message that you'd updated.
Anyway, I need more, I can't see quite yet where this is going, so get the next chapter out soon!