I love Hermione's growing hostile behavior. It adds so much to the story. Your OC's are amazing as well. Great job!
Another amazing chapter! Great job!
The Message and the Messenger
Oh. Wow. As you already know, I love this chapter as I know that it builds to so much more in later chapters. But still...wow. Wonderful job. I love it!
As you already know, I love this chapter. It is extremely intense and keeps you on the edge of your seat. Wonderful job!
The Failed Plan
Again, another wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
A Long Awaited Revelation
Hmm...now the question is: Will Harry show up? Wonderful job!
Hmmm...interesting developments. :) Wonderful job. I especially loved the dream at the beginning and the sequence at the end.
The Old Potion Room
Hmm...a figure in the hallway and Valencia can see through the cape. Another amazing chapter! I can't wait to see where it's going!
The Darkened Corridor
Hmmm...what's the purpose of this new necklace? And I wonder what that page read. Great job, Kev. *winks*
A History of Magic