Cute! The fluffiness...I see fluffy chicks and bunnies hopping all around! (In the rain with blackcurrant-jam mustaches!) Lovely work, extremely enjoyable! Ten thumbs up!
I really enjoyed this and how you portrayed Molly and Author's relationship at their age. It's the usual plot; parents don't want their child to get together with someone else, but I really liked this one, and I think it's different and more creative with all the other elements you put into this. The plot of this was really great, and I love how you characterised young Molly especially. Great job!