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Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous)
05/28/2006 09:38 pm
Way cool!!

Author's Response: Thanks again, Sarah!  LSV



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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
05/25/2006 08:07 pm
i could visualize this poem throughout the whole thing.  great job, you put a lot of detail into a short poem.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing "Night Visions".  It's always a challenge to say more with less in poetry and I feel encouraged to keep adding to this collection.  Regards, LSV



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Reviewer: fluorite (Anonymous)
05/22/2006 08:47 pm
Nicely done.  I like the use of "tapestry".


Author's Response: Thanks - I think I was subconsciously visualizing threads from the Black Family tapestry!  LSV



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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
05/22/2006 07:53 pm

Ooh, very nice. I like the dark theme of it, and the word order you used. You described everything to well. I don't think I've read a poem on the Forbidden Forest before, and this is a fantastic one. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your encouragement, Luna!  It's been many years since I've written any poetry - and this is also my first addition to the WT archives. 

Regards, LSV




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