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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
05/16/2006 06:34 pm
great start, i loved Sirius' line about his hair and the leaf and everything. good job, very funny. i liked the end.



A Force to be Reckoned With
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
05/16/2006 04:05 pm
This story looks to be very amusing. I really like how you portray Lily. How she has only aquaintances as friends and likes to be alone... Reminds me of myself at times. I liked how you wrote her thoughts on her parents, too. I'd like to see where you take this. Great job!


A Force to be Reckoned With
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