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Reviewer: HermioneWeasley1972 (Anonymous)
02/04/2006 01:52 pm
Very cute, I can't wait to read more. I just found a couple of tyos: “B-But…” Little James’ lower lip trembled as he tried to hold up his innocent-little-boy-playing-in-the-sandbox façade, no doubt taught to him by his older brother, James. ----I'm guessing that this should have said little Sirius' lower lip trembled since James is mentioned later and Harry calls him Sirius. waved his hand around a bit, using his wand that Sirius had conveniently ‘borrowed’ to erase and lingering traces of----erase *any* instead of and. :) Good job though! Keep up the good work!


Chapter 1
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
09/28/2005 02:28 pm
That was great! A cute little fic, lol. I love his kid's names. Harry seems like a great father, that was nice of him to drop the waterbombs back into the sand box. I love how it ended, great job!


Chapter 1
Reviewer: James And Lily 4eva (Signed)
06/27/2005 11:34 am
:D what a nice start to a story...do update


Chapter 1
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