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Reviewer: brooklyn_malfoy (Signed)
06/18/2006 06:21 pm
lol. ingeniusly written =]

Reviewer: witch767667 (Signed)
05/14/2006 09:30 pm
Poor Harry!!!! Idiot Huffelpuff!!!! Funny story!!!!!

Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
05/14/2006 02:47 pm

Haha, this was amusing. I loved Voldemort saying what Dumbledore would say about it all, haha, that was brilliant.

Nice job!

Author's Response: Thnx a lot 4 reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 09:16 pm
*giggle* That was cute! Wow, Mike is not too sharp, is he? Your writing at times reminds me of Lemony Snicket.

Author's Response: he really is quite dull isnt he? anywayz im soooooooooooooo happy u reviewed and i dont really know who lemony whatever is but it sounds like a compliment! thnx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: WiCkEd (Signed)
05/13/2006 09:11 pm
Wow... I love this story! It won an award if I'm correct which it rightfully deserved! I love the way you blended the whole 'I'm-going-to-be-evil-and-kill-Harry-Potter' and innocence in Voldemort... well, not exactly innoncence but still. The auror was my favorite... so naive and just plain stupid. LOVED IT! Great job!

Author's Response: it got a reward, most humerous! I cant believe ppl like me 4 writing, i mean ppl liked me 4 sports, yeah, biology physics, chemistry english all im good at, not math anywayz, but WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ILL ALWAYS RESPOND 2 REVIEWS SO PLZ TELL PPL 2 REVIEW WEN THEY READ,4Got to turn the capslock off, thnx anyway

Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
05/13/2006 06:51 pm

This story made me laugh. Voldemort was just characterised perfectly, and the Auror was just so gullible! This line has to be my favorite:

“Well, I don’t forgive people, so you’re just out of luck, aren’t you?”

It really portrays how evol Voldy still is, and still gives it the Humour touch. Great job!!

Author's Response:

i like that part too, im glad i made u laugh, *who r u agen?* just kiddin, my favorate part is the part:

"I am a very skilled Legilimins, and I heard that part about my hair, you think I wanted to lose my hair? I had nice hair"



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